So this is fine. Actually, it really is. I like it. I wasn't sure about the see-through sleeves but they're at least a subtle touch of something interesting, and I like the edgyness on her because her face is so cherubic. Okay, in this photo it's not super cherubic, but with the big doe eyes and how all her characters tend to be cheerfully kind dimwits, "cherubic" is usually how she comes across.
The back panel MIGHT be a touch '80s Music Video though.
Everything is better than that brown suit he wore to the first one.
He starts to look so different when he monkeys with the facial hair. This feels very Distinguished Detective to me. Maybe a bit old-school Dr. Watson.
I hope he keeps shaving it into weirder configurations until the events are over.
Menswear experts: Is it bad form to have your sleeves stick out of the jacket that much? I do at least applaud the shoes.
Yep, still the same story: Nice idea, and yet there is something (harmlessly) awkward about him.
WORK IT, good sir. Enjoy your minutes.