That fabric is so COOL -- bright and sparkly but still glamorous rather than garish. I just want to reconceive the entire bodice, basically. Nix the straps maybe, but for SURE have it come up higher, or... it just needs something, and I will show you why.
From the side doesn't that look too low? Am I nuts?
Those are cheery, and are a surprisingly perfect color match with everything in the dress. I APPROVE.
She looks phenomenal, though. I think... part of my issue with the top is that when the spaghetti straps go SO far off to the side like that, they feel pointless, and it makes things boxy in a way that's not very flattering. So that in combination with the low line of the top is what's giving me pause. But I am pressing PLAY on her hair and lipstick. PLAY.